Okay, well..... There was some things that I really enjoyed about your video. One: you showed the cargo bay opening from multiple sides. Two: uh....um...... I liked the music? Look, you obviously have some type of potential. I know myself that I am not that great at this stuff either but I can offer some suggestions. First, The opening scene was draaaaaagggeeeed on. The first scene's sheer length combined with the choppy camera movements almost made me stop the video. Second, while I really did like that you put in the drop of the mongoose multiple times, it seemed that alot of your clips were not cut properly. The last drop had about 3 seconds before the boxes even moved out of the way. That just simply draws away my attention when I have to wait. Finally, The end was so drawn out. I'm guessing that you were trying to work with the music at that point, but when the last 45 seconds is absolutely nothing, it is time to forget bout the music. So overall, it was time issues. Try to make more short and concise clips that get across the point in less than 5 seconds. Oh, and I do understand that there's not much to this map so it can obviously be difficult to make a full video out of it, so I'll give you brownie points there.
